Pyaar ki ek Kahani

Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...



Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.


Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.


She remembers
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.


Among the
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.


Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.


In dark night
she runs away from the house.





Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.


Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”





Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.





She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.

wahh ......... plss continue ....

ya plz continue. liked the introduction.

Munir i too belive in sincere comments... Bcoz they are very important to improve the story...

Glad to see one more writer for serial one... Welcome munir to fan-fiction area (as a writer)

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This the introduction and the character names are 'Gauri' 'Pratham' ...







Iam sure, u will get many more comments, compliments and viewership (but no critical comments ) \



JUST ONE REQUEST: If u post this story, twice in a week... Then it will be more gud??? Plzzz munir?


P.S: Eagerly waiting for the next part! ( episode )

Hi!! Nice story yaar!! Plzzz update soon with big epis .

NICE WAITING FOR NEXT

awssim story dude story padke to pc se hatne ka man nahin karta ye baandhi rakhti hai
par tum ise twice in a week bheja karo aur agle part mein kya hoga
jaldi hi bhejna

nice story.....

Thank you very much Gayathri, Aanchal, Diipendu, Usha, Sahil, Saumya and BLH for your precious comments..
Diipendu and Soumya, thanks a lot for such encouraging words. It will be difficult for me to post the story twice a week, as I am planning to post two other stories besides this one (and after 5 to 6 episodes I will like to ask you all which of my story you are enjoying more) anyways but I will try my best, whenever I get time I will try to post it twice.

Thanks to all readers once again. I hope in coming parts, I will be upto your expectations. Feel free to give comments and your views..bye

Iam eager to watch the episodes, plz come soon...

ok so on your request I am posting the second part..Plz do give your comments about your likes and dislikes...
Pyaar ki ek kahani
Part 2
Prathams family members were talking about Pratham's marriage.



Ajay Chachu : Array jab bhi mai Saniya Mirza
ko dekhta hun mai sochta hu Pratham ki shaadi is jesi ladki say honi chahiye..


Badi Daadi : Array nahi nahi..agar is say
hui to ghar mai kab rahey gi..Mainay soch liya hai Pratham ki shaadi kis say
hogi. Pratham ki shaadi kissi sanskarri aur adarshwadi ladki say hogi aur mai
aisi ladki ko jaanti hun…


Chotti Daadi : Badi..tu to rehnay
dey..Mainay bhi soch liya hai Pratham ki Shaadi Katrina Kaif jessi kissi ladki
se hogi.


Umesh Mittal : Bas kijiye.Mai nahi chahta
abhi Pratham ki shaadi kay baaray mai kuch bhi discuss ho. Pratham abhi
university mai hai aur jab tak uski prahai puri nahi hoti tab tak aap mai say
koi bhi uski shaadi kay baaray mai baat nahi karay.

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Pratham stops his
car and finds a very cute girl standing near him looking very afraid.


Gauri : Mujhey
bachalo wo mera peecha kar rahey hain
And the she fells down.


Pratham got worried. He sat down and looked towards the face of Gauri. He took out bottle of
water and sprinkled some water on her face. she
opened the eyes and got nervous and confused.


Gauri : Kuch log
pata nahi kyu mera peecha kar rahay hain…Please mujhey bacha lo.


Pratham : Sure !


He opens the car
and Gauri sits inside. He drives the car fastly and then tells her..ab
ghabranay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.Mera
naam Pratham hai aur mai Mumbai mai rehta hun. Tumhara naam kya hai?


Gauri who is still
afraid and confuse tells : Mera naam Gauri hai.


Pratham : Oh ! Nice
name Gauri…Accha tumhein jaana kahan hai ?


Gauri : wo is taraf
dekho wahan par Mandir hai mujhey wahin par chod do.


Pratham : Kya ???
Itni raat ko mandir mai kya kaam hai…


Gauri : Kyu? Matlab
kay….mujhey..mujhey haan Mandir mai Puja karni hai is samay..


Pratham : Itni raat
ko ?


Gauri : Haan please
mujhey wahan par chod do please..


Pratham was
surprised but yet he said : ok jesa tum chaho..


He drops her
towards Temple and goes away to his home.





Pratham is not
staying in any hotel over there. Instead there is old bunglow of Ajay Chachu
over there so Ajay Chachu had given him keys of the house so he may stay there.
Pratham goes to house and whole night he thinks only about Gauri? Wo ladki koun
hogi..Kya wo Mandir jaana chahti hogi ya phir jhoot bol rahi hogi?





Gauri spent all
night in Temple and in morning goes to her friend’s home
whose name was Peenal. Peenal is childhood friend of Gauri. She and Gauri were
nice friends but Gauri never visited her home because of restrictions imposed
by her aunt and uncle.


Peenal got happy to see Gauri..



Peenal :
Gauri kesi ho tum?..tum itni subha subha..come inside


Gauri : Peenal,
Kya mai tumharay ghar mai kuch din ruk sakti hu agar tumhein koi problem na ho
to?


Peenal : zaroor
Gauri..kyun nahi? Magar ye bata aaj tu itni udaas kyu hai.


Tears came from
eyes of Gauri and she says : Peenal mera is duniya mai koi bhi nahi hai. She
tells every thing to Peenal.


Peenal : Come on
Gauri ! don’t cry please ! Dekho mai tumhari dost hun aur meray saamnay agar
tum rougi to mujhey bhi rona aajayega. Tum fikar nahi karo mai tumharay liye
kuch na kuch zaroor karungi. Tumhein chinta karnay ki zaroorat nahi hai.


After saying this
she gives tight hug to Gauri.


Gauri : Peenal
Uncle aur Aunty ghar mai nahi hai?


Peenal : Mom to Delhi gayi hai apni dost ki shaadi attend karnay
kay liye aur Dad office mai gaye hain. Shaam ko ayeingey.


Accha ruk mai abhi
aati hun..She brings golla ganda for her and Gauri..Pratham opens the
car and finds purse of Gauri…Array ye to apna purse yahin par bhool gayi..Kahan
dhundoo? Ho sakta hai wo abhi bhi ussi Mandir mai ho. He goes to Temple finding her..Oh God please mujhey us ladki
say milwa dijiye..He finds every where there but Gauri was not there.





Peenal shows some
of her dresses to Gauri..Gauri ye dekho..Mai kal shopping per gayi thi mainay
kal hi ye khariday..


Accha aik kaam karo
ye white wala skirt abhi mai pehnti hu aur ye black wala tum try kar ke dekho
kesa lagta hai tumhein..


Gauri : Nahi
Peenal wo mai…


Peenal : Oh please
Gauri please issey pehen kar dekho na please..


Gauri : Magar
mainay aisay dress kabhi pehnay nahi hai…


Peenal : Oh Gauri !
mujhey pata hai ye short hai magar yahan hum dono kay illawa aur koi nahi hai
is liye kya problem hai? Gauri believe me tum to is dress mai pariyon ki raani
lago gi.


Gauri smiles and
says ok…


Both of girls
change the dresses and wear skirt blouse whose skirt was just little above their knees.


Then Peenal says to Gauri:
aik minute mujhey aik kaam yaad agaya..Tum yahin raho mai padosi aunty Shanta
Bai kay ghar say abhi 10 minute mai aati hun..ok


Gauri says ok and
smiles.. Now Peenal goes away…After 3 minutes door
bell rings…


Gauri : Array
Peenal itna jaldi aagayi…Chalo accha hai


And as she opens
the door, it was PRATHAM.


Pratham looks at
her and gives her a big smile.


(How Pratham came there?...what will happen now. For that you have to wait for the next part)



Coming up next:


Gauri’s Uncle,
Manik will order Chakan bhai and Chiman bhai to kidnap Gauri.

Most touchy and romantic part, where gauri was asking help from pratham and then woh behosh hou jaati hai. Pratham ko gauri ka purse milta hai and wahi ek connection ka point banta hai.

Gauri ko skirt mein dekhkar pratham ko yeh yakeen hou jayega ke gauri safe hai and woh apne ghar mein hai, i guess... But ab precap ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai ke gauri danger mein hougi aur pratham aakar osey bachakar ley jayega.





Waiting for 3rd part/episode.

thanks for updating munir

liked this part also. eager to read wat happens next. & i too hope ki pratham will save gauri from the upcoming danger

Thank you very much Diipendu and Aanchal they you have enjoyed the second part too. The next part will tell you whether your guess that Pratham saves Gauri will come true or not..
Hopefully tomorrow I will be posting first part of "Koi tum sa nahi", Hope you will enjoy that too.

thanx for sending so romantic updates when pratham finds the purse of gauri in car there make a sun kind of bond so it was really good and when pratham saw gauri in skirt how will he react i'm eager to know that and i think pratham will save gauri frm kidnappers and take to bombay
and the 2nd part of ur story is very good but it's to short
nywys plz send next updates soon