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Post by HitenGaurifan on 5/7/2009, 9:24 am

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Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...



Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.



Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.



She remembers
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.



Among the
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.



Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.



In dark night
she runs away from the house.






Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.



Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”






Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.






She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.

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Post by Sahil kohli on 19/7/2009, 5:29 pm

nice parts thanks

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Post by virgosaumya on 19/7/2009, 8:36 pm

dude epi awssim tha and best part is ki gauri pratham ke ghar aayi that will be ok
but ab gauri par koi laanchan na lagaaye to acchha hai
kyunki humari society mein most of the people thinks that ek ladka-ladki kabhi dost nahin hote
aur pratham gauri ke saath flirt na kar raha ho
but the epi was nice

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Post by aanchal on 20/7/2009, 11:15 am

a wonderful part once again. clap
pratham thinks he is smart but gauri is smarter Razz
i hope peenal ki mom koi problem na create kare gauri ke liye

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Post by diipendu on 20/7/2009, 11:49 pm

HitenGaurifan wrote:Diipendu How can I increase the size of fonts?

Munir you can use ''Text Fonts" to increase the font size.



It is given in button.

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Post by HitenGaurifan on 22/7/2009, 6:15 pm

Thank you Sahil, Saumya and Aanchal for the comments.
Saumya, let see what happens next..btw Pratham was trying to impress Gauri but he do not any thing about Gauri except that she is friend of Peenal.

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Post by HitenGaurifan on 22/7/2009, 6:21 pm

Thanks Diipendu. I am waiting for your comments on part 4.

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Post by HitenGaurifan on 19/10/2009, 9:58 pm

Recap :


In last part
you had read Peenal got to know that Mandira had called her mother and inquired
about Gauri. Peenal asked Gauri to live in Pratham’s home meanwhile she plan
some thing for her. Pratham tries to impress Gauri..Gauri fells down on floor
because of ice cream there..






Part 5:





Gauri fall down
on floor..Pratham comes running towards her..



Gauri: Its ok
Pratham...She tries to get stand but is unable to do so..



Gauri: lagta
hai meray pair (leg) mai moch agayi hai



Pratham holds
her hand and help her in standing..



Pratham looks
in innocent eyes of Gauri the pain which she is having because of some thing..



She took Gauri
to her room and made her rest on bed..



Gauri: Thanks
Pratham..



Pratham : Wait
a minute Gauri…



Pratham goes
some where..Gauri closes her eyes and Pratham comes again with turmeric powder
(haldi)..



Pratham sits
near Gauri in bed and holds her leg..ab dekhna tumhein kitna jaldi theek
hojayega..



Gauri : Pratham
ye kya kar rahey ho..You don’t need to do this..I am fine sure…



Pratham: Gauri
don’t say any thing! Pata hai aik baar mujhey bhi aisay lag
gaya tha aur maa nay mujhey lagaya tha..Tab
mujhey bhi laga ye kya maa laga rahi hai lekin phir mujhey jaldi theek bhi
hogaya…



He say this
while applying turmeric powder on her legs.



Gauri feels
like crying because her own aunt and uncle have never concerned or cared for
her pains and Pratham who is just like unknown is caring for her so much.



Pratham when
see tears in eyes of Gauri gets afraid that is she feeling pain as I am
applying turmeric powder in her legs or what?



Pratham: Kya
baat hai Gauri? Ro kyu rahi ho? Kya dard ho raha hai?



Gauri : Nahi,
bohot wakt kay baad dard kam ho raha hai..Thanks for so much caring..



Pratham smiles
and says : uff baar baar thanks mat karo..From now we are friends aura b tum
aaram karo subha tak theek ho jayega..



Aur me abhi
Khana bana kar laata hu..



Gauri : Kya !
Tumhein khana banana aata hai..thats sweet



Pratham get
confuse now : haan par tum yahan aaram karna..






Pratham go to
kitchen: Mai nay to socha tha roz restaurant mai say khana khaunga lekin ab
Gauri !



Kuch try karta
hu..nahi garbar ho jaye gi..best idea ye hai chupkey say bahir nikal jau aur
samany wali hotel say kuch le au..



He go out side
home silently..then thinks saamnay wali hotel say khana laya to Gauri ko shak
ho jayega kay itna jaldi mainay khana kesay bana liya.. Gauri waisay bhi aaram
kar rahi hai mai kahin aur say lay kar aata hu..



He go out
side..






Shyla has come
her home.



Peenal : Mom Delhi mai kesa laga..Hope you enjoyed there..


Shyla : Haan
maza to bohot hi aaya..Tumhein bohot miss kya..Agar tum chalti toh kitna enjoy
kerti.



Waisay Peenal
tumhari dost Gauri ka kuch pata chala. Uski aunty ko uski bohot chinta ho rahi
hai.



Peenal get
confuse. She don’t want to say lie to her mother but she also don’t want to put
life of Gauri in danger. She don’t know what to say. Before she say any thing
Ramesh says : Shyla yaha aana..



And she goes
there in next room.



Peenal feel
relax for a moment. She thinks of Gauri how she will be in Pratham’s home.
Mujhey pata hai Pratham bohot friendly hai..Hope kay Gauri theek ho aur khush
ho..






Pratham comes
home silently and goes to kitchen. Then he comes to Gauri and says Gauri :
Gauri chalo khana tayyar ho
gaya hai..


Both eat food.
Gauri smiles : Pratham khana kahan say laye ho?



Pratham : wo wo
kitchen say..haan kitchen say hi toh laya hu..



Gauri smiles
and says : kya sach mai…?



Pratham : Nahi
wo actually Gauri tum bohot smart ho..ye mai bahar say laya hu par yaar I don’t
know how to cook..



Both smiles and
enjoy the food.






Next day
morning.



Pratham: Gauri
mai abhi jogging karnay ja raha hu. Is kay baad Peenal kay paas jaunga..I will
come back soon so don’t worry..



Gauri : its ok


Pratham :
Waisay How are you feeling now?



Gauri : I am
fine..Dont worry..



Pratham goes
for jogging..



Gauri now feels
she is quite fine. She looks at the home which she finds untidy..She thinks to
give Pratham a surprise by doing the work..



After some time
when Pratham comes he get surprise. He find house clean then before, things at
their proper places.



Pratham : Array
ye mai kis kay ghar agaya hu?



Gauri smiles
and says: Tumharay Ajay Chachu ke.



Pratham: Ye
Ajay Chachu ka ghar ho hi nahi sakta..Itna Saaf?



Gauri looks
towards Pratham and Pratham says : Mera matlab hai Ajay Chachu apna ghar saaf
nahi rakhtey is liye..






Chakkan : Array
cheeman abhi tak apun nay kuch kaam shuru nahi kya ..aik hafta to yuni khatam
ho jayega rey !



Cheeman : Abay
khajoor apun kay dimaag mai aik Solid idea hai rey..



Chakkan : Kya
rey?



Cheeman : dekh
wo Manik lagta hai bohot rich hai..



Chakkan : Reech
? ye to aik jaanwar ka naam hai



Cheeman : Abey apun ki baat sun ! us kay paas say bohot
saara rokraa mil sakta hai rey ! Apun ko uski baton say idea ho gayala hai wo
kuch bhi apun ko de sakta hai agar us ka apun nay kaam kar diya to..Apun is
haftey kuch kaam nahi karey ga..Baad mai apun us ko ye bol dega kay jis ladki
ko usney kidnap karnay ka bola tha wo itna aasaan kaam nahi hai..is liye agar
thoda zyada paisa milley tho hi kaam ho sakta hai…phir dekhna !



Chakkan : Haila
ye to mast idea hai lekin tujhey lagta hai wo aur jaada paisa dega..



Cheeman : Tu
dheeraj to rakh..Apna idea kabhi flop nahi hota.






Peenal comes
with flowers for Gauri..



Peenal : Hi
Gauri how are you?



Gauri : Mai to
blikul theek hu



Peenal :
Pratham nay bataya tumhray per mai moch agayi..Mujhey to both fikar honey
lagi..



Gauri : Chalo
accha hua tumhein apna promise to yaad hai roz milney ka..



Peenal : Sure
aur dekhna mai try karti hu jaldi kuch na kuch karu gi..

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Post by diipendu on 20/10/2009, 12:22 am

Episode was sweet and romantic. But the kidnappers may try to create some problem for gauri and pratham... Please update this part asap. Smile

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Post by virgosaumya on 20/10/2009, 8:29 pm

mindblowing updates bas ab pratham gauri ko luv karne lage that willl be awssim

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