Pyaar ki ek Kahani

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Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...



Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.


Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.


She remembers
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.


Among the
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.


Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.


In dark night
she runs away from the house.





Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.


Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”





Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.





She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.

thanx for sending so romantic updates when pratham finds the purse of gauri in car there make a sun kind of bond so it was really good and when pratham saw gauri in skirt how will he react i'm eager to know that and i think pratham will save gauri frm kidnappers and take to bombay
and the 2nd part of ur story is very good but it's to short
nywys plz send next updates soon

so nice part,waiting 4 the next..
thanks 4 updating...

NICE THANKS

Saumya, BLH and Sahil...thanks for reading and giving comments on the part...thank you friends

Recap : Gauri asked help from Pratham to give her lift and she stayed night at temple. In morning she went to the home of her friend Peenal. Peenal told Gauri that she will help her. She had bought two mini skirts. She requested Gauri to try one. Gauri wore that dress. Peenal goes to her neighbour’s home. Some one knocked the door. Gauri opens and find Pratham.


Part 3:

Gauri is very surprise. Pratham smiles and is too stunned to look at Gauri.
Pratham : Gauri tum yahan ! ye lo apna purse…
Gauri took her purse just then Peenal comes and in excitement
Says : Pratham Tum ! Tum kab Panchgani aye…au ander chalo..Kesay ho tum?
Pratham : Peenal mai theek hu aur mai kal raat ko hi Panchgani aya hu.Subha socha tum say milney chala au by the way (looking towards Gauri) who is that cute girl?
Peenal : Oh Pratham ye meri dost hai Gauri aur Gauri he is my friend Pratham. He is from Mumbai.
Pratham shakes hand with Gauri
Gauri : Peenal mai abhi dress change ker kay aati hun..
Pratham : No Gauri, you are looking nice in it.
Pratham talks with Peenal and Gauri for some time, then he says bye and go away.

Mandira Aunty comes running towards Manik Uncle.
Mandira : Tum yahan baithay muskura rahe ho.Pata hai kya hua…
Manik: Kya hua.bas kuch mahino baad Gauri 21 saal ki hojayegi. Is ke baad kuch na kuch kar k Gauri say is ghar ke papers per sign karwa lunga aur is paper per sign ka matlab samajhti hai…ye ghar humaray naam ho jaye ga.
Mandira : Array sapnay dekhna band karo.Gauri ghar chod kar bhaag gayi hai.
Manik : Oye thand rakh thand.ye to aur Accha hua.Mai nakli papers bana lunga
Mandira : Array..agar baad mai chal kar Gauri agayi aur us nay property par claim kya aur court mai case kya…Mujhey pata hai aisa wo nahi kar sakti magar agar aisa hojata hai toh..
Manik : Mushkil say aik aadmi mila jo is say shaadi karna chahta tha aur us nay bola tha kay ussay Gauri kay paisay nahi chahiye..agar Gauri ki us say shaadi ho jaye to wo humein bohot paisay dey ga aur….kuch na kuch toh karna padey ga us chorri ka..Tu fikar na kar mai kuch karta hu..he gives wicked smile.

Then Manik calls Chakkan Bhai and Cheeman Bhai…
Manik gives photo of Gauri and says them : is ladki ko kidnap karna hai. Kahin se bhi issay dhoond kar kidnap kar lo. Agar aik haftey mai issay kidnap kar liya to aik laakh milley ga..
Chakkan : Aik lakh ! bas apun us ko jaroor dhoond ker kidnap kar ley ga.Ye apun kay liye bohot chotta kaam hai.
Manik : Toh jau aur kaam shuru karo…bohot chalaki say kaam karna !
Cheeman : Array boss ! tension nahi lene ka rey ! Apun bola na aik haftey mai tera kaam ho jaye ga..


Its now 9:30 at night. Ramesh (Peenal's father) comes home.
Ramesh : Peenal aaj mujhey office mai late ho gaya.
Gauri : Namastey Uncle
Ramesh : Namastey.
Peenal : Dad ye meri dost hai Gauri. Kuch dino kay liye meray saath rahey gi..
Ramesh : Gauri ! bohot accha naam hai.

After few minutes Peenal brings coffee for her dad.
Ramesh takes a sip and says : Peenal aaj to coffee bohot hi acchi lag rahi hai.
Peenal : Dad waisay ye mainay nahi Gauri nay banayi hai.
Ramesh : Oh ! coffee bohot acchi hai.
Ramesh : Accha tumhari mom to hai nahi.Ghar mai khana to nahi hai. Aaj bahar chal kar Pizza khatey hain..
Peenal : Sorry dad mujhey bhook lagi hai wo kya hain na ki aap ne kaha tha aap ko der lag jayegi aur mujhey bohot bhook lagi thi toh maine khana thodi der pehlay kha liya..
Ramesh : Its ok magar khana?
Peenal : Dad ! Gauri nay masala dosa banaya hai.bohot hi tasty hai.Aap bhi kha kar dekhiye.
Ramesh : Sure.
Ramesh eats masala dosa and then says : Gauri…
Gauri : Ji uncle..
Ramesh : Ye tum nay banaya hai…
Gauri who is nervous : Ji uncle.kya accha nahi bana hai.
Ramesh smiles : Accha nahi ye to bohot hi accha hai. It is very tasty and delicious.Gauri you are brilliant.
Gauri : Thank you uncle.
Tears have come in eyes of Gauri because cooking and working was her daily routine but she used to get only harsh words and after her Grand father’s death..first time she found sweet words for her from her friend’s dad.

On other hand Pratham is playing guitar. He is imagining Gauri. Her image has got fixed in his eyes. All the time her beautiful face comes infront of him when he begins to think.

Its now next day morning.
Peenal : Chalo Gauri Pratham say milney chaltey hain..
Gauri : Par mai…
Peenal : Chalo wo apnay Ajay Chachu kay ghar mai hoga.
Gauri : ok
Both girls are walking and talking happily in very pleasant weather. In garden near bungalow they find Pratham doing exercise.
Pratham : Hi girls how are you?
Both of them reply: fine
Peenal: Pratham is samay tum bohot handsome lag rahe ho
Pratham: Kya sirf is samay? Mai hamesha hi handsome lagta hu
Gauri slowly asks Peenal: Peenal kya tum Pratham se pyaar karti ho
Peenal: Gauri Pratham is like my good friend and brother.
They kept talking for some time.

Coming up next : Peenal : Gauri aik bohot hi badi bad news hai.
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i like pratham's attitude.& his comments when gauri says she will go & change her dress & when peenal says that he's looking handsome..... typical pratham mittal style

liked this part alsol.

ya me too

Hey pratham ko gauri ka naam pata tha pehle se osne yeh bhi bola 'Gauri yeh lo apna purse' then phir woh peenal ke saamne dikhava kar raha tha ke osey gauri ka naam nahi pata...

Gauri's uncle and aunt is soo cruel, as they want to kill gauri so they can claim to her property. But jab pratham gauri ko yaad kar raha tha... I think pratham gauri ke liye kuch feel kar raha hai...


Hey precap mein peenal ne bola ke 'Ek badnews hai...' I guess, peenal city se kahin baahar jaa rahi hai??? Esiliye gauri ko pratham ke uncle ajay chahu ke bunglow mein rukna hoga?



SUGGESTION: Munir next time please donot post such long episodes... If you break one episode in two posts, it will be easy and more eye-catchy!

Thanks a lot Aanchal, Sahil and Diipendu for reading and replying for the third part of the story.
Diipendu regarding your suggestion, I did not understand what you mean to say. Do you mean to say that Shall I divide one part, into different small parts and post it in different posts or do you mean to say that every week when I do post one part, I should shorten the length.

gauri ka peenal se ye pochna ki kya tum pratham se pyaar karti ho
i think she likes pratham ny wys keep it up and send updates for us aisi hi
awssim work dude

Ya you are right and thanks soumya for the comments.

ur welcum

Hi friends
So now its time for Part 4. I hope you will enjoy it. From this part there will be interaction of Pratham and Gauri and their friendship. Due to the length of the part, I am dividing it into two...take ur time to read them but do reply..positive, negative any comments you have..ur comments really matters a lot.

Part 4 (a)


Recap: In last
part you have read that Manik ordered Chakan and Chiman to kidnap Gauri. Gauri and
Peenal meet Pratham. Ramesh likes the food made by Gauri. Pratham finds
attraction towards Gauri.
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Peenal gets phone call of her mother Shyla.


Shyla : Peenal Kesi hai tu?


Peenal : mom mai theek hu. Aap kesay ho? Wahan maza aaraha hai.?


Shyla : Haan Peenal maza to bohot aarahai. Accha sun tumhari class mai aik ladki thi Gauri…Tum jaanti ho na..


Peenal : Haan Mom magar..


Shyla : Us ki aunty yani Mandira ka phone aya tha k Gauri ghar say gayab hai. Ab ussey ye nahi pata hai k kissi nay ussey kidnap ker liya hai ya wo khud ghar chod ke bhaag gayi hai….Dekh Peenal agar Gauri teray paas ghar aye to mujhey phone ker ke bata dena. Uski beechari aunty aur uncle uskay liye bohot chinta kar rahay hain…


Peenal is now confused : ji mom..


Shyla : Accha mai phone rakhti hu..


Peenal : bye mom.


Shyla : Bye.





Peenal says to her own self : Mai ye baat kesay bhool gayi k meri mom aur Gauri ki Mandira aunty dost ki tarha hain. Ab mai kya karu? Agar Gauri wapis us ghar mai jayegi to uskay liye problem hoga aur mom jab wapis ayegi aur Gauri is ghar mai hogi tab toh aur bhi zyada problem hoga..Kya karun mai…

Gauri comes there and says : Kya hua Peenal tum itni pareshaan kyu lag rahi ho?


Peenal : Actually Gauri aik bohot hi badi bad news hai..


Gauri : Kya?


Peenal : Meri mom ko tumhari Aunty nay phone ker k tumharay baaray mai poocha. Ab tum yahan nahi reh sakti ho..Magar aik minute aik idea hai..


Gauri : Kya?


Peenal : Tum kuch dino k liye Pratham kay ghar par ruk jau..Gauri believe me, mai tumharay liye kuch na kuch zaroor karungi. Jaldi tumhari is problem ko end karungi lekin kuch dino kay liye tumhein Pratham ke ghar jaana hoga toh yahan par mai apnay mom aur dad ko sahi moqa milley tab convince kar ke sachai bata sakun.


Gauri : Lekin Peenal…..


Peenal : Gauri meri baat suno..Pratham is not stranger. He is my brother. Bhagwaan ne mujhey koi bhai nahi diya lekin Pratham aisa hai jo meray liye bhai ki tarha hai. He is very nice guy aur mujhey us par bharosa hai wo tumhara khayal rakhey ga aur kuch dino ki hi baat hai..I promise mai tum say roz milney aya karungi…


Gauri : Mai is wakt jis halat say guzar rahi hu mujhey khud ko samajh nahi aaraha hai mai kya karun. Mai kissi k liye problem create nahi karna chahti hu.
Mujhey kya karna chahiye kya nahi mujhey samjh nahi aarahai hai. Mai wohi
karungi jo tum mujh say kahogi.


Gauri starts weeping and Peenal replies : Gauri please rona band karo. Tumhari aankh mai ansoo dekh kar mujhey bhot dukh hota hai. Tumhari aunt aur uncle ko unkay kiye ki saza zaroor milley gi. Tum rona band karo. I am with you. Now please smile.


Gauri smiles.

Part 4 b continues..............


Peenal dials cell number of Pratham..


Peenal : Hello Pratham tum kahan ho..


Pratham : Mai jogging kar raha tha..Bolo…


Peenal : Pratham agar tumhein koi problem na ho toh kuch din kya Gauri tumharay ghar mai reh sakti hai..


Pratham gets very excited on thought of Gauri..


Pratham : Haan haan sure, bilkul jaroor magar waisay kyun…


Peenal (Saying lie to Pratham): Gauri meri dost hai jo Chandigarh se yahan par sirf mujh say milney ayi hai. Meray ghar mai kuch problems hai mai tumhein abhi nahi bata sakti is liye kuch din ke liye tumharay bungalow mai rahey gi agar tumhein problem na ho…


Pratham : Bilkul mai abhi ghar ja raha hu..Tumhari dost yani kay meri dost..Ussay tum abhi la sakti ho…





Pratham thinks : kya wajah hogi jo Peenal apni dost ko meray ghar bhej rahi hai. Wajah jo bhi ho meray liye yahi badi good news hai. Oh God! Ye to sach mai chamatkar ho gaya..





Peenal then takes Gauri to Pratham’s house. She had given some of her clothes to Gauri..


Pratham opens the door and says to Gauri: Welcome here…Issey tum apna hai ghar samjho .


Gauri says : Thanks !


Pratham makes million dollar smile on his face and moves forward his hand saying friend


Gauri smiles and shake her hand with him.


Peenal went away..


Pratham takes Gauri inside his house.


Now he thinks to impress Gauri.


Pratham : Accha Gauri dekho tum is kamray mai reh sakti ho..Dekho kitna saaf hai..


He goes inside and shoes kept on floor comes in his way and he was about to fall down and
Gauri holds him..


He says : Thanks…Kamra toh saaf hai..ye shoes pata nahi beech mai kesay aagaye..strange !


Ab mera karma dekho kesa hai..
He tooks Gauri to his room and shows his room…


Gauri is having smile on her face..


Pratham : Ye mera room hai..aur tumhein mai batau aaj mainay apnay liye naya shirt kharida and as he opens the cupboard all dresses falls down which were all mess up in cupboard rather then being properly arranged.


Pratham : wo..


Gauri : Its okay Pratham


Now Gauri points towards a room : Ye kis ka kamra hai…ye tum nai bataya nahi..


Pratham just stands infront of door preventing Gauri to come and open door to see whats inside..


Pratham : Nahi..is room mai tum aaj nahi jaana…


Gauri : Accha magar kyun? Koi khaas wajah?


Pratham: Kyunki… yeh… Haan yeh Ajay chachu ka private kamra hai


Pratham is standing with his back on door.. and because of that door opens and he falls down inside..Gauri comes and give hand to Pratham..Pratham holds her hand..there is eye contact between two and both feel magical spark inside heart for each other..Any ways Pratham stands and Gauri finally watch what was inside room..


Pictures of Hollywood models wearing very sexy type costumes
hanging all over the walls..


Gauri : Pratham ye tum nay kesi pictures lagayi hui hai?


Pratham is confused. He tries to tell lie.


Pratham : Ye room Ajay Chachu ka Private kamra hai..unki lagayi hui hai..Ab wo mujh say baday hai mai kya bol sakta hu..


Gauri understands that Pratham is trying to make her fool..


Gauri : Pratham meray paas Bhagwaan ki tasveer hai. Tum in sab ko nikaal kar ussay yahan laga
do. Tumharay chachu bhi khush hongey..


Pratham : Nahi wo actually chachu ye kehtay hai Bhagwaan ki pictures toh har koi apnay ghar mai lagata hai..wo apnay ghar mai Bhagwaan ki banayi hui in pyaari cheezon ki tasveer rakhna chahtay hain..


Gauri : ok and
she goes.


Pratham: Gauri… He thinks Gauri must be angry
on him and what she must be thinking of him.


So he goes to Kitchen.


He says : Kitchen mai ice cream hai. Mai Gauri say kahunga ye ice cream khud mainay us ke liye banayi hai. Wo khush ho jaye gi. He takes ice cream and is about to go but tray of ice cream slips from his hand and ice cream is on floor.. he is worried
what to do when Gauri enters kitchen.


Gauri: Kya hua?
She sees ice cream on floor.. ye kya hai?


Pratham: Ye..kuch nahi bas yunhi… meri aadat hai cheezein idhar udhar phainkna… its fun you know and he takes few things and throws on floor to convince Gauri that he is saying truth but Gauri stops him..


Gauri: Pratham…aisa mat karo.. khana zameen par aisay nahi phainktay hain.. paap lagta hai..


Pratham looks at Gauri and thinks how innocent and cute she is.


Gauri goes and suddenly her eye fell on the room in which there were pics of models..


She looks inside there was not any more pics of sexy girls. Instead there was picture of Bhagwan Ganesh which Gauri had given.


Gauri smiles and says : Pratham abhi toh tum keh rahey they ye Ajay chachu ka room hai aur un say poochey bagair tum ye pictures nahi hata saktay aur abhi hata di ?


Pratham smiles naughtily and says : Haan Chachu ka tha room jabhi toh hata di. Room say hata kar un pictures ko apnay dil mai rakha hai and he runs…


Gauri: Pratham…and goes after him and goes into kitchen following him and she falls because of ice cream on floor.





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Diipendu How can I increase the size of fonts?

nice parts thanks