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It was a beautiful atmosphere. There was beautiful garden. Rain was falling and a beautiful girl was dancing in rain. She was calling her name Pratham…wahan kya kar rahe ho yahan au dekho kitna maza aaraha hai. As he was about to go there, the sound of alarm clock made him wake up from his dream.
Pratham: Oh no…ye subha itni jaldi kyun hojaati hai. Abhi college jaana hai.
(Pratham Mittal is handsome, smart, naughty and funloving type of person. He belongs to a rich family who lives in Mumbai. Yash and Hiten are his best friends)
Gauri was combing her hair and getting ready for the college. Before going for the college she prays infront of the idol of Ganeshji..hai bhagwan aaj mera college mai pehla din hai. Sab kuch acche se ho.
(Gauri Pradhan is very cute, intelligent and fun loving girl. She belongs to middle class family. Her family has shifted from Hyderabad to Mumbai some time back so Gauri has got admission in new college. Its her first day in college. Her only friend here is Priya, who is also one of the friend of Pratham)
As Pratham was getting ready, chotti daadi comes there.
Chotti daadi: Kya hua aaj college badi jaldi jaa raha hai
Pratham: Haan wo kuch kaam hai
Chotti daadi: Kissi ladki se kaam hai na..Sab samjhti hu mai
Pratham smiles and goes away.
Pratham went to the college and while he was busy talking with Yash and Hiten he remembers that Natasha is waiting for him in library. Gauri was in very much hurry as she got late because of traffic problem. She was running and Pratham was also running. Both bumped into each other and fell down. Pratham looked into eyes of Gauri..what a beautiful eyes, beautiful face. She was looking very nice in blue salwar kameez. Gauri was lost in thoughts as she finds Pratham very good looking. As she stood up…
Pratham: Will you marry me?
Gauri: What do mean?
Pratham smilingly: Oh maine kaha excuse me. Don’t you know what it means?
Gauri: Oh sorry. I thought you said some thing else.
She went away while Pratham was thinking of her only.
Coming up next:
* Gauri : Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho gey ki Gauri koun hai !
* PM smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun.

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liked the part very much. pratham's reaction on seeing gauri

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So ur stories will be update every weekends... That's cool as u r doing 3 stories, so it's gud slot.
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Mine fav. line is where hiten says to gauri ''will you marry me'' and den suddenly he turn his words to ''excuse me'' lol this style is really cool and also fits with pratham character as he is a badmaash...
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It was morning. Pratham was still sleeping. Yash came to Pratham’s room and made him wake up…Pratham…Pratham….!
Pratham: Haan bol yaar kya hua?
Yash: Aaj Natasha ka birthday hai !
Pratham: Kya? Arre haan mai toh bhool hi gaya tha. Tu kya kal mujhey yaad nahi dila sakta tha?
Yash: Arrey aaj subha us ney mujhey call kiya. Mujhey khud pata nahi tha. Mai bhi bhool gaya tha Lekin wo bol rahi thi mujhey pata tha Yash tum bhool jaugey lekin dekhna Pratham ko yaad hoga.
Pratham: Accha tu collge jaa mai abhi gift shop se gift ley kar aata hun.
Gauri was standing in corridor and was reading a book. Pratham after buying gift for Natasha came running to the college and once again by mistake he bumped into Gauri and both fell down.
Pratham saw Gauri was today in beautiful pink top and black pant and was looking nice.
Pratham: Will you marry me??
This time Gauri burst out
Gauri: What you think of yourself?
Pratham: Some one who deserves to be your boy friend !
Gauri: How dare you ! Mr…
Pratham: Pratham !
Gauri: Whatever ! I am not that type of girl . Don’t dare to…
Pratham: I am sorry..Actually I was joking. Galti say mai tum sey takra gaya mai jaldi mai tha is liye mainey tumhein nahi dekha believe me..!
Gauri: Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho ge ki Gauri koun hai
Gauri went from there.
Yash : Arrey Pratham koun thi wo?
Pratham: Pata nahi !

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Chotti Daadi: Mai to ja rahi hun. Tu chal rahi hai ?
Badi Daadi : Kahan per?
Chotti Daadi: Beauty parlor mai aur kahan ? Facial, Wax, manicure karanay..
Badi Daadi : Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram ! Chotti tu kab badi hogi. Kalyug agaya hai kalyug !
Chotti Daadi: Tujhey aaj pata chala hai. Kal tak kya tu apney aap ko Treta yug mai samjh rahi thi. Dekh badi 2009 zamana agaya hai. Mai toh ja rahi hun..
Gauri was reading some thing from notice board and Pratham came from back and says
Will you marry me ?
Gauri in anger turned and saw Pratham with mobile in his hand.
Pratham (to Gauri) : Kya hua? Mai tumhein nahi keh raha hun. Apni dost Kali se baat ker raha hun.
Pratham : Haan toh mai tum say keh raha tha ki {Watching towards Gauri, he says in phone} kal tumhein blue salwar kurtey mai dekha. Bohot sundar lag rahi thi tum aur aaj is Pink top mai to tum bohot hi acchi lag rahi ho !
Gauri { in anger} Now will you please Shut up !
Pratham : Excuse me ! Whats your problem, Mai toh apni dost say baat ker rah hun.
Gauri goes from that place and Pratham also goes in same way following Gauri and pretending that he is talking with some one on phone.
Pratham { in phone but looking towards Gauri} toh mai keh raha tha tum gussay mai bohot acchi lagti ho par kya tum kabhi smile nahi kar sakti ho?
I love you Gauri..
Now Gauri turned towards him in extreme anger..
Pratham continues : Gauri Gauri si Kali !
Pratham smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun.
Gauri saw Prathan has brought gift for some girl. She exchanged that gift and packs Cauliflower
In same type of gift paper and puts there !
Pratham gives gift to Natasha and says
You are such a special friend that I have bring special gift for you. Open it now and see the Surprise !
Natasha : Thank you Pratham
Gauri was looking all………
THE END
What will happen Next for that wait for the next part !

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loved this part too. waiting eagerly for next saturday
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jo bhi ho epi was nice

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