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Post by Guest on 12/1/2008, 9:27 pm

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Khwaish Apnaa Apnaa is a story about two rival hearts, Pranav and Garima. They want to destroy eachother at any cost, will they ever fall in love?

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Post by diipendu on 4/5/2009, 1:11 am

Episode 6

Classes ke khatam hou jaane ke baad jab sab loug apne-apne ghar jaane ke liye nikal rahey thhey tab Garima aur Nandani bhi college se apne ghar jaane ke liye nikal rahey thhey.

[size=16]Nandani Garima ko bahut samjha rahi thi ke woh gussa na karey. Magar Garima ko oos anjaan shaks par bahut gussa araha tha kyunki osi ke wajah se aaj garima ka accident hou sakta tha, aur osi ke galat tarah se car drive karne se garima ka woh cellphone bhi toot gaya.[/size]



Nandani : offo garima! Tu kyun itna gussa kar rahi hai? Woh bhi oos shaks par........ jisey theek tarah se tu jaanti bhi nahi?

Nandani : I know ke tera cellphone toota hai, aaj tera accident bhi hou sakta tha... Such kahoon tou mujhe bhi oos shaks par bahut gussa aya tha... Magar garima, dekh hum kisi par gussa karenge aur osey do baatein suna denge tou ees hum apne dil ko halka kar lenge... Magar aisa karne se humein aur oos anjaan shaks mein kya diffrence rahega?

Nandani : meri baat maan, tu maaf kar dey osko aur bhool jaa jo bhi hua hai...

( Tabhi Garima boli )

Garima : nahi! woh samajhta kya khudko?! Ameer hai tou kya osne saare sadakon ko, college ko aur raston par kisi bhi raah-chalte ensaan par woh ees tarah se car chala dega???


Garima : agar maaf karna achhai hai tou maafi bhi osi ko dii jaati hai jo maafi ke kaabil ho!... Agar aaj osne aisa kia hai tou woh kal ko woh aisa phir se kisi ke saath yeh accident karega, magar dusre baar woh accident zyada serious bhi housakta hai... Chahe jo bhi hou main kal oos anjaan shaks ka pata lagakar oos car waale tak pahuchkar hi rahungi!





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Post by aanchal on 4/5/2009, 12:22 pm

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Post by diipendu on 5/5/2009, 9:00 pm

Episode 7


Nandani : garima tum bahut ziddi ho... Theek hai, tum waisa hi karo... Magar oos car waale anjaan shaks ka pata lagayenge kaise?

Garima : oska bhi ek tareek maine pehle hi nikaal lia tha!

Nandani : matlab?

Garima : maine oos car ka number note kar lia tha... Ab kal woh college phir se ayega aur hum classes ke shuru houne se pehle-pehle hi oos car ka pata lagayenge, parking area mein... Phir woh shaks jo koi bhi hai, oska pata bhi humey chal jayega.......................



Garima aur Nandani baatein karte hue college ke main gate se baahar nikal rahey thhey ke tabhi wahaan ek car aakar rukti hai.


Garima aur Nandani jab oos car ko dekhte hain tab Garima ko yaad ata hai ke woh car tou oski maasi ka hai.

Driver Garima ko cellphone dete hue kehta hai ke yeh phone onki maasi ka hai. Garima phone recieve karte hue-


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Garima : hello?...

Maasi : hello garima? Beta kahaan thi tum? Oos waqt tumne phone kyun disconnect kar dia tha? Mujhe bahut chinta houne lagi thi ke pata nahi kya ho gaya hoga tumhe?... Beta tum theek tou hou na?

Garima : maasiii main bilkul theek hoon... magar...



Maasi : magar kya?





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Episode 8


Garima : maasiii main bilkul theek hoon... magar...

Maasi : magar kya?

Garima : kuch nahi...

Maasi : achha suno, maine tumhare liye wahaan car bheja hai... Tumhe seedha wahaan se yehaan ana hai!

Garima : magar maasi, ghar par maa aur papa mera intezaar kar rahey hounge? Maa ko agar pata chala ke main college se seedha aapse milne aayi hoon tou woh tou bahut buraa maan jayengi...

Maasi : agar tum mujhse abhi nahi mili tou main tumse gussa hou jaungi! Phir apni maasi se tum kabhi baat mat karna... ( maasi udaas houte hue garima se kehte hue )



Garima : achha babaa main aapse milne aarahi hoon...

Maasi :


( maasi se baad karne ke baad )




Nandani : kya hua? Kya kaha maasi ne?

Garima : maasi ne kuch urgent baat karne ke liye mujhe bulaya hai... Tum mere saath hi car mein chalo, main tumhe chorrkr maasi se milne chali jaungi...

Nandani : theek hai...




Nandani apne maasi ke ghar pahuchti hai.



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Episode 9



Nandani : kya hua? Kya kaha maasi ne?

Garima : maasi ne kuch urgent baat karne ke liye mujhe bulaya hai.


Nandani apne maasi ke ghar pahuchti hai.


Maasi : garima, beta achha hua ke tum agayi...

Garima : kya hua maasi, aap pareshaan lagg rahin hain... Sab theek tou hai na?

Maasi : beta tumhe tou yaad hi hoga ke last time jab ek foreign client se ek project ke liye meeting karni thi tab tumhi ne oos waqt mujhe help kia tha... Tumhare ideas har baar sucessful rahey hain, aur mujhe pata hai ke tum eesbaar bhi mujhe help karogi?

Garima : magar maasi main kaise?


Maasi : ab please naa mat kehna!


Maasi : kya tum apni maasi ko itna bhi help nahi karogi?

Garima : theek hai, main ees project ko handle karungi... Magar... Yeh problem kya hua hai?


Maasi : ( pareshaan houte hue ) actually.......... Humaare company ko jo deal mila hai, osi deal ke liye humaare rivals bhi tyaari kar rahey hain... Yehaan tak hi humare jo sabse badey rival hain "Mittals".




Garima : mittals?...........




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Episode 10




Garima : theek hai, main ees project ko handle karungi... Magar... Yeh problem kya hua hai?

Maasi : ( pareshaan houte hue ) actually.......... Humaare company ko jo deal mila hai, osi deal ke liye humaare rivals bhi tyaari kar rahey hain... Yehaan tak hi humare jo sabse badey rival hain "Mittals".


Garima : mittals?...........


Maasi : haan wahi mittals jo peechley 6 saalon se humse competion kar rahey hain... Tum pata hai ees baar, oon mittals ne humaare company ke khilaaf galat rumours media ko dey dia jis se humaare company ke haathon se yeh deal chala jaaye aur onhey yeh deal mill jaye...

Maasi : ab agar yeh deal humaare haathon se agar chala gaya tou humare company ki image, company ka reputation mitti mein mill jayega... Please do something garima??? Please help me garima?...

Garima : maasi, main apki beti jaisi hoon aur aap mujhe please kehkar gair bana rahin hain... Main apse vaada karti hoon maasi... Yeh deal, humare hi company ko mill kar rahega!......................





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Mittal palace mein-



[size=21]Om mittal, mittal company ke owner, aaj breakfast table par beithe thhey. Saare family members ek-ek karke wahaan breakfast table par aakar join kar rahey thhey. Om mittal ke do bete- Samay aur Pranav, aur om mittal ki ek beti- Dia. Dia sabki laadli hai aur khaskar woh apne papa ki aur apne bhai 'Pranav' ki sabse favouriate hai. [/size]


Om mittal apne badey bete samay se bahut khush thhey kyunki woh apne responsibilities ko bahut samajhta hai magar om mittal apne chote bete 'Pranav' se bahut upset thhey, kyunki jahaan samay buisness mein aur apne saare responsiblities ko samajhta hai wahin pranav hamesha apni mann-maani karta tha.




Mittal Palace mein har baar jab bhi pranav koi galati karta, oski choti behen dia ya phir pranav ki maa oske har galatiyon ko om mittal se chhupa dete.




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[size=21]Breakfast table mein jahaan saare members aakar beith gaye thhey wahin ek jagah abhi bhi khaali thi. Om mittal ki nazar oos khaali jagah par padti hai. [/size]







"PRANAV!......................"



( Om mittal bahut zyada gusse se pranav ko bulaate hue )








Dia : ( mann mein sochte hue ) aaj tou bhaiya gayye!




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Mittal palace [size=21]mein-[/size]







Breakfast table mein jahaan saare members aakar beith gaye thhey wahin ek jagah abhi bhi khaali thi. [size=16]Om mittal ki nazar oos khaali jagah par padti hai.[/size]




"PRANAV!......................"





( Om mittal bahut zyada gusse se pranav ko bulaate hue )



Dia : ( mann mein sochte hue ) aaj tou bhaiya gayye!





Udhar Pranav apne room mein-








Pranav ki neend khulti hai.[size=16] Woh ooth jata hai aur shower leta hai.[/size]


Eedhar breakfast table par jahaan om mittal bahut gusse mein thhey, ghar ke sabhi loug bhi bahut darre hue thhey om mittal ke gusse se.


Pranav ki mom, om mittal ko samjhate hue kehti hai-




Pranav's mom ( gayathri ) : dekhiye aap gussa mat kijiye... Aap tou jante hi hain ke pranav par aajkal bahut saare zimmedaariyan hain... Ek taraf college tou dusre taraf yeh buisness... Woh kar raha hai na kisi tarah phir bhi?


Gayathri : opar se raat bhar woh jaagta raha oos project ko complete karne ke liye...



Om ( pranav's dad ) : Kya tum such keh rahi hou?



Gayathri : haan-haan!


Om : Project ka file tou mere paas hai........ Tou pranav kispar kaam kar raha tha???

Gayathri : wohhh...



Gayathri : dekhiye aap gussa mat kijiye, abhi pranav bachha hai kisi tarah se sambhaal lega yeh sab?...

Om : tumhare eesi laad-pyaar se woh bigar gaya hai! Pranav ko apne badey bhai samay se kuch seekhna chahiye!...



Gayathri : ( mann mein sochte hue ) pranav, beta please jaldi se neechey breakfast table par aao...

Om : mujhe indiscipline bilkul bhi bardaasht nahi hai! Kya tumhare laadle pranav ko itna bhi nahi pata! Tou kya buisness woh khaak sambhalega?!




Udhar Pranav-











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Episode 12


Pranav apne room se baahar nikalta hai aur breakfast table tak pahuchta hai.



Om : poore 10 minute late hou tum! Jo shaks waqt ki kimat ko nahi samajh sakta hai, kya woh buisness ko khaak samjhega?!..............


Pranav : sorry dad...


Om : sorry my foot! Aaj tumhari saza yeh hogi ke tum college bina breakfast kiye jaoge!



Gayathri : yeh aap kaise baat kar rahey hain... Pranav se bas choti si bhool--


Om : bhool??? magar ab yeh koi bachha nahi raha!


Om : agar ahinda mere paas pranav ki koi bhi shikayat, koi bhi complain aayi.... Agar pranav ne phirse koi bhi galati kii tou.... Mujhe pranav ke khilaaf strict action lena padega! Did you get that pranav?! ( gusse se pranav ko kehte hue )


[size=16]Pranav nazarein jhukaaye wahaan se college ke liye nikal jata hai. Magar Jab pranav bahar apne car mein beithne hi wala tha tabhi wahaan gayathri aakar pranav ko breakfast ek tiffin mein pack karke wahaan lekar ati hai aur pranav ko samjhakar osey dobara koi bhi galati karne se mana karti hai.[/size]




Gayathri : beta yeh lo tiffin...


Pranav : maa aap kyun mujhe har baar ees tarah tiffin dene chali aati ho? Main koi school jata bachha nahi hoon...


Gayathri : magar harkatein tou tu bilkul bachho jaisa karta hai na!


Gayathri : dekh, tu apne dad ka gussa janta hi hai... Phir bhi tu hamesha galatiyan karte rehta hai? Itna mann-mani karta hai???



Pranav : maa dad kabhi mujhe samajhte nahi hain tou main kyun samjhoon unhe? P.M apne rules khud banata hai!




Pranav wahaan se speed mein car chalate hue college ke liye chala jata hai.




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Episode 13





Pranav apne car mein college ke liye jaa raha tha ke achaanak oske car mein kuch problem hou jata hai.




Pranav : ohh no!......





Udhar Garima aur Nandani college pahuch jaate hain.





Nandani : garima aaj tou oos shaks kaa parda-faash houkar hi rahega! I hope ke hamara plan sucessful rahey...


Garima : i hope so.... Kal oos shaks ke wajah se mera accident houne wala tha aur aaj oske car ke number se oska pata chal jayega... Magar mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke---


Nandani : ab tum zyada mat socho! Woh jo koi bhi hai woh aaj college ata hi hoga...




Pranav College bike par aata hai.





Garima aur Nandani jahaan se guzar rahe thhey [size=16]wahin se Pranav apne bike par jaa raha tha. [/size]






[size=21]Pranav Garima ke bahut paas se guzarte hue jaa raha tha. [/size]






Magar garima ne pranav ko dekhna nahi aur na hi pranav ne garima ko dekha.



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Garima : ( pareshaan houte hue ) nandani, kya woh shaks jo koi bhi hai...... Kahin woh aaj college naa aya tou???



Nandani : dekh tu negetive mat soch! Woh jo koi bhi hai, aaj pakra jayega! Aur hum khud principal ke paas oos shaks ko ley jayenge aur oski complain karenge...





Garima : i hope [size=16]woh shaks aaj college aaye...[/size]





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Episode 14




Garima : ( pareshaan houte hue ) nandani, kya woh shaks jo koi bhi hai...... Kahin woh aaj college naa aya tou???


Nandani : dekh tu negetive mat soch! Woh jo koi bhi hai, aaj pakra jayega! Aur hum khud principal ke paas oos shaks ko ley jayenge aur oski complain karenge...


Garima : i hope woh shaks aaj college aaye...


Nandani : tension ko kam karne ke liye main abhi tumhare liye ek ice-cream laati hoon...


Garima : thanks...



Garima apne books ko paas waale bench par rakh deti hai.


Garima : yeh nandani aane mein itna late kar rahi hai... Main abhi nandani ko dekhkar aati hoon...



Garima ne apne books jis bench par rakhe thhey, garima ke wahaan se jaate hii wahaan Pranav apne friends ke saath baatein karte hue jaa raha tha.



[size=16]Pranav apne friends ke saath baatein karte hue osi bench par beith gaya magar jab osne dekha kekisi ne apne books wahaan rakhe thheytabhi pranav ne oon books ko uthaakar kahin side mein rakhne wala hi tha ke tabhi wahaan Garima aakar Pranav ka haath rokk leti hai.[/size]






Garima : ( bahut gusse se ) tumhari itani himmat ke tum mere books ko fekne waale thhey?!



Garima : kya tumhe itna bhi nahi sikhaya hai kisi ne ke books ko fekna achha nahi???





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Post by aanchal on 14/5/2009, 10:23 am

garima ne phir pranav ko galat samjha

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Post by gayathri087 on 14/5/2009, 1:01 pm

hmm..... garima reflects nature of real life gauri .. superb story line

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Pranav : magar main tou bas een books ko... l]ees se pehle pranav apne baat kehta oos se pehle garima ne bahut gusse mein pranav se kaha- ]


Garima : ( bahut gusse mein ) maine apne aankhon se dekha ke tum mere books ko fekne waale thhey!...



Tabhi wahaan nandani aati hai.



Nandani : garima tum kyun khama-kha eespar gussa kar rahi hou... Maine bhi dekha ke woh tumhare books ko fekne nahi wala tha, balki onhe side mein rakhne hi jaa raha tha...

Garima : nandani maine khud eesko mere books ko fekte hue dekha hai!






Scene : Pranav gusse se Garima ko dekh raha tha. Garima ke gusse bhare nazarein bhi Pranav par thii.




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Pranav wahan se chala jata hai.


Nandani Garima ko wahaan se ley jaati hai.




Nandani : garima dekh tu oos car waale shaks ka gussa eespar mat utaar...



Garima : magar maine khud... [ Tabhi classes shuru hou jaate hain- ]




Garima aur Nandani apne classes ke liye jaldi se chaley jaate hain.




Scene : Garima aur Nandani apne class mein enter karte hain ke tabhi garima ko phirse wahi deekh jata hai jo garima ke books ko fekne wala tha.





Garima Pranav ko gusse se dekhte hue apne bench ke taraf beithne ke liye jaa rahi thi. Pranav bhi Garima ke taraf gusse se dekhe jaa raha tha.







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